Review Detail of Ruler1 in Out of Space

Great original idea, it reminds me of a book I read somewhere but this book contains magic. The writing quality is not bad albeit some minor errors and skipping of the layout of their temporary complex makes it hard to visualize the surroundings. The story development is a bit rushed, I am suspecting that the author just writes on the fly and releases the chapter. If the author spent more time on how he wants to develop this world the novel would be at the top spot. View More