The author has a very smooth writing style that is both easy to read and flows from one sentence to the next. The synopsis of the story seems to be more of a prologue, while the first chapter jumps directly into the plot. As there is only one chapter posted so far, it is difficult to judge the story development, character design, and world background. However, the MC has already been shown to possess an interesting special ability and a rather resilient personality. Though some plot points seem arbitrary at the moment, I can only assume they will be elaborated on later on in the novel once more chapters are uploaded. The stability of updates is very lacking, as the first chapter was posted three and a half months ago with no new content since then. Overall, this is a story with an interesting premise and it would be great to see its continued development. I would like to express my support for the author, as well as my sincere thanks for your work.
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