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SpoodiesLv145yrSpoodies

Yo i like the story so far but the world is way to cliche ya know? you got all the continents and then there's the supreme sects and also he starts off in lower world. and also he's the young master which always happens.. also you should make the chapters longer as chapter 9 literally the only thing that happend is that he opens the package and the system explained it and that's it. Btw im hoping he doesnt use the seduction talisman i on some hopeless homless girl.

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He will not stay in that world for more that 20 chapters xD you can think of it as his home town which he will protect later on, most of the story will be on other world anime... as i said it is a fan-fic xD and no it will not be used on some random character :p