Review Detail of flipflops in All Existence

Ouf! I've been reading for a little over 6 years! (Web novels/Manga/Xianxia/Wuxia/Fantasy etc), This author is GREAT! This is his first novel and that already says so much since his worth ethic and quality of work is top-notch. I appreciate that so much, thank you! Anyways, Lucien, the MC, is being developed quite nicely. Loyal to what is first displayed of his characteristics. Cold, calculating and ruthless. Willing to achieve it all at the cost of anything, ANYTHING! The story-line is satisfying as there is no rush nor is it too slow. If only I had a time-machine... damn it. The prob is no chapters!! Ahh! But never would I want to trade a faster pace but a lower in quality of chapters! This is a good pace and great quality. I enjoy the world-setting. It is clear that he is but a frog-in-the-well right now and I can't wait to see what the author has in-store for us. Parting notes would be... it'd be great if the author could run an editor! Pick up the grammatical mistakes every-now-and-then would make it all the more enjoyable! Hmm.. maybe I could offer my services. Just like an hour free everyday wouldn't be too shabby... (victoribasco18@gmail.com)