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Review Detail of BlaqueLyte in Blackmailing A God. Cheating In Another World

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BlaqueLyte
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You realise your novel's name is totally false, right? M.C. didn't ' somehow ' get a cheat. It wasn't by luck or by chance. He blackmailed it from a god. Your first chapter title was named that. You were better of naming the book "God killed me so I'd reincarnate, so I blackmailed him for a cheat". That even sounds more interesting. And your chapters are like they're a draft for the real chapter you haven't written yet. You need to develop the characters, events, situations and plot more

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Blackmailing A God. Cheating In Another World

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Saberswordguy
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The tittle is now lmoa

Brayon101
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Hello check out Peerless Martial God *_* I’ll really appreciate this and thanks for reading this; keep on reading

Saberswordguy:The tittle is now lmoa
Saberswordguy
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Man this is the 6th time you've reccomended this novel to me 😅

Brayon101:Hello check out Peerless Martial God *_* I’ll really appreciate this and thanks for reading this; keep on reading
Brayon101
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My apologies

Saberswordguy:Man this is the 6th time you've reccomended this novel to me 😅
Saberswordguy
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Author tsk tsk you really dont know how to advertise your novel if people see that you are advertising your own novel they will feel disdainful especially when it's not to thier liking 🤦‍♀️ use another account that would be smarter *sigh* I never thought I would give advice on such matters

Brayon101:My apologies