Hey, this is pretty good. the character is well developed as well as the story. Too bad that you don't update regularly though. Readers would get bored if there are no regular updates so you better think about updating in a regular basis. I'm looking forward to more of it.
JohnnyKbca
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LIKEJohnnyKbca:Thanks for the review. Yeah, writing fast was never my strong suit, especially with job and college taking so much of my time, which is why I'm not able to update as regularly as I'd like. My hope is to graduate from college and one day live from my writing so that I may focus more on my stories.