Review Detail of VateRise in Duality

Let me start by saying, that I read it from 17th chapter, just like author asked. Truthfully, not a bad story, but there is some plot armour involved. I personally would prefer a more ******** version, but that is personally. Quality is there, all chapters I read I understood. I didn't have to wonder about meaning whatsoever. A few mistakes, but again 5 🌟 for quality. Release rate though. I understand that people are busy. But this site asks me to rate that, so I do. Character design is not bad, but then again, too many coincidences and many "good" characters appearing. World building is 5 🌟 I have nothing bad to say here. And then there is the story. If developed well, I'd say it will be a good novel to read. Keep up the good work, and work hard. You can make it to 1m views no problem.