Review Detail of PeachyPearl in Duality

*Valid till chapter 18* I liked how you explained your terms that you would be using later in the novel because I am a newbie when it comes to cultivation novels, so I could understand what was happening thanks to your earlier explanation. The writing quality, is understandable and grammar wasn't too bad either. The trasitions between one incident to another was also quite good. I can't say that there weren't mistakes but as long as it doesn't hinder reading then it's not a big deal. Though there were a few events which are cliché (I won't give spoilers by pointing them here, so read it yourself people:) ) but using them in a good way is also necessary that you did. Nice work author. Fantastic story so far.