honestly this is The best Fanfic I've ever read. I absolutely love all the twists and turns of the plot. Its overall fantastic but the twists and turns from indifference to devilry to compassion to intrigue to mild indifference is utterly stunning.

Hi there... the author here. So, first of all this fiction is an advertisement of my first non fanfiction work: The Children of Destiny. As for this one... 2 chaps per day till I run out of stock. 1 extra chap for every 10k views on The Children of Destiny. I'm shameless. Bite me.

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One of the best stories on this site and the mc doesn't want to get strong for the sake of getting strong (and he has actual feelings and story progression) and the cultivation side is well done. His goal may seem bad but when you think about it it makes since

Should've been good, but the writing style feels like a fanfiction.net fanfic, which I don't like. And about pakura... just no. ruined the mc's character the moment she came in the story.

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One of the greats! Your novel is unique and shoukf have way more following then it has, on RRL and here. It thinks it’s the sheer intelligence you put in your world. I mean your vocabulary is probably beyond mist of your readers lol. Good work. Hope to a great writer like you when I grow up lol

this is definitely the best naruto fanfic on this site I simply can't understand how this isn't more popular while those other naruto fanfic that are simply awful get so easily into the top 50. this fic has simply wonderful grammar and writing quality especially when compared to the other naruto fics here. the story itself is amazing I love how you incorporated the cultivation stuff into the narutoverse especially kaguya's background was magnificent I look forward to the friendship between the 3 of them your character development of the main cast is great too you made me love the characters. all in all I can't recommend this story enough it's simply amazing my daily 2 power stones have been going to you author and will continue to go to this story it's definitely my favorite in tis site.❤

the idea of the story is good, but it was not well taken, some parts that I can not understand, the MC talks about the multiverse, the cultivation, etc., to someone who has only known for a little time and has not earned his confidence, that should be said almost at the end of the novel, about the multiverse, etc. The MC should be more cautious and calculating, have everything well planned, even if he has lived many years, still acts as a young man, etc. I also think it would have been better if I had come to the world of Naruto in the era that the villages were forming and it was easier for them to form their country, etc., in the place where they would locate the Uzumakis and could recruit them. to join him. I do not know if I explained it well Thank you