Review Detail of V_C in Anime System in the Naruto Universe

So, are you continuing those other 2 novels??? Are you at least keeping the cultivation world 1?????!!!!!!!!!!!!

yeah the The Inheritor of the Eight Gods and A One Piece System in a Cultivation World will still have chapters in the future.

So, we are good... wait what???!!! Another novel created??? Mmmhhhhh... well, whatever... ima just wait for my dose of cultivation chapter... bye!

Is my mans gunna become dumb dumb op also will toriko stuff be in this?

I really enjoyed the other novel. Even though you only wrote a few chapters, it still had a hook. A very important piece of the puzzle. You're right that making a character too op too early leaves little improvements for strength, but I also think you made the wrong choice in the actions you took to change it. Yes, your character was really op, yes your character probably didn't have much in the way of strength growth in his future, but you're neglecting other important aspects that you could have used to balance it out. Yes, he's basically immortal to everyone in the Naruto world, but sealing jutsu still exists. Yes, he can kill 19 bandits with one punch, but what about other techniques? What about control? Learning to use his power. Your novel had the hook and the reason why that hook worked is that it capitalized on very basic plot lines that are some of the most entertaining in my opinion. Yes, your character was op, but it was ok because he didn't actually know how op he was. There was no "hiding strength" nonsense, "bullying the weak" nonsense, "weak to strong" nonsense. Your character acted in a way that a person who has never used a devil fruit would act. He banked on the fact that he couldn't be killed, played the role of being "unimpressed" without coming off as arrogant and had fun with it. The character itself had fun with it. It was like taking a fan of one piece off the street, giving him the fruit and sending him into the Naruto world. The character reacted to everything realistically, which is the most entertaining to read. And to top it all off, you even wrote in a "superhero pose" that wasn't cliche in the least! Blowing 19 bandits to ashes, being surprised by what he did, then playing it off and coming out all cool by saying "You're next". That scene made me relive every single action movie I've ever seen. Because "cool guys don't look at explosions". It made me remember the first time seeing ace use his fruit in alabasta, to take out all those baroque works battleships. I actually went back and found that clip on youtube just to see it again, your writing gave me that experience, it made me want to see that scene again. I'm really truly disappointed. I read a lot of novels on this website. I have 45 different novels bookmarked for this website alone. I keep updates on around 10 of them and binge the others every 100 or so chapters. Out of all the original novels, I was looking forward to yours. I was really truly looking forward to yours. I checked back to those three chapters every single day for the entire week that you didn't write. I wanted more so badly. Reading these words of mine on a screen cannot possibly explain to you how much I was looking forward to that story, I'm not eloquent enough to put it into words. I don't want you to use the other story to build this one, I really absolutely don't. If you use that material here, that plotline here, I won't be able to force myself to read it. You only wrote three chapters, but when I read those three chapters, it was like I was watching it as an anime. That has never happened to me with an original novel. Never. Hell, I didn't even care about the fact you broke canon! I worship canon! It's everything to me, I make my own novel stick as closely to canon as I possibly can because IT IS the story. I usually go off on people when they break canon, it's one of the things that I hate seeing the MOST. Because they always do it badly, they always have crap grammar and butcher it all to hell, it ruins the actual original story when I see them do it. But I didn't even care when you did it. It was so good and now you've up and thrown it away. I mean I know I'm just talking out my ass here, but ****. I'm so disappointed. ((((((EndPartOne))))))

((((((BeginPartTwo)))))) I know you're sitting there, reading this. You might try to give me lip service, you might try and make me feel better. Then again, you might not try to do any of that because I'm calling you on it right now. At the end of the day, I'm just a reader, and you're the author. What does my opinion matter right? Even if you do take my opinion "to heart" sorta speak, so what? Whats done is already done. It's not like I can change your mind or get you to see my point of view. Even if you did change your mind and even if you did see my point of view, then what? Would you take my advice and take another look at that story from a different viewpoint? You might try to do it, but what good would come from it? You've already sentenced it to death. Even if you tried to bring it back to life, would it be the same as it was before? Would you be able to write the same quality as before after what you've just read? Nope, probably not. It's so strange. It's so bitter. I feel like I read a manga that was never finished. Thirteen episodes of anime with no conclusion. I'm mourning the death of an idea. It's so weird.

Your problem is not them being too op, but choosing the wrong verse. If you want a ''strong to mightier" story, you need a setting that can sustain it, a world building where even being always at the forefront of power, the mc can constantly discover and go further.

why u stop writing