Review Detail of Morvian in The Heaven Defying Helping System

Grammar, I don't have any judgement for this point since my grammar is bad but you need recheck your writing before uploading since there's many missing word that make your reader confused with what you intended in your sentence. big flaw in this novel is you seem writing this without any planning and care about everything you write in the past. example, you clearly write that protagonist choosing Auto Cultivation talent since he doesn't want to do that manually but you clearly ignoring this and this fact seem to be gone in the next chapter. Poison body, usually this type of body should be the unique body type that could be strengthened by consuming poison qnd make the owner to ignore negative effect from any poison attack since it will strengthen him instead. but this function seem like doesn't exist in the first place since he need antidote to cleqr the poison in his body instead of using it by absorbing it using poison body. there's many thing that I want to tell, but the obvious mistake so far is what I wrote above so there's no need for me to write everything. good luck, hopefully you will do your best on writing since you're uploading your writing then you meqn for other to read it. but if you use excuse like you're just trying to write while improving it but didn't even have heart to fix any mistake so far then it's better to write on your computer with ms.word then save it in your computer without uploading it.