Bad. *Plot armor is ridiculous. Every conflict is resolved by relying on the system. Everything(skills, equipment, pills, exp) is gained by relying on the system, the MC does not need to work, everything is handed in a silver platter and spoon fed to him. *Needs a proofreader. Every chapter is like an essay made by a grade schooler. *Everything lacks depth, everything.
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