Review Detail of Vaell in The Heaven Defying Helping System

The plot is unique and interesting however, there are so many flaws in this novel that really lowers it's quality. First of all is the grammar. You really need to get an editor or use a program like grammarly. From run ons, punctuation problems, tense conflicts, and etc. You have pretty much every grammar error there is. Also the writing quality really isn't good. Try to follow the writing structure of the common CN novels.