Awesome work, I really enjoy it so far and hope that you can keep the chapters coming! Also, just putting it out there but I hope you can keep this story going for a long time as I enjoy it.
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very good potential.the execution till now is perfect if the releases were more frequent would be best.good work author............................................................................-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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I was so close to dropping this in the beginning as it went into groomer territory real quick, but given its title and how short it was, I held out hope there’d be a twist to the formula. And for a second there, after the gimmick of MC’s power was revealed, I really felt this story would subvert the typical tropes, putting the MC through Izanami like loops until he was a worthy hero. I expected too much! Groomer decided to groom harder! Overall concept was fresh to me, promising even, but it soon fell into typical patterns with MCs character growth seemingly being thrown away.
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This is a very good story. Probably the only one I watch everyday, constantly waiting for an update and yearning to see and read more of this work of art. It is a story I wouldn't mind recommending. Kudos autho-san!
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Not bad but not that good either, its the same reincarnation to naruto with system if you didnt know. Problems I have are that you're mixing too much chinese into a japanese setting which might be fine for the MC but not for others like Ayame, your dialogues structured in an annoying way and lastly you really need to explain the system better. Updates are rare and when they do happen its not that much, grammar is readable, development is slow, character design is basically Yhang Ze if he was a loser.
une bonne histoire, il et juste dommage de tros suivre l'histoire de naruto , je trouve que sa limite le développement de l'histoire. par exemple , avec un monde parallèle presque comme naruto avec des différence mineur, comme le nombre de montagne ou de clan dans le village pourra vous aider .
I have but one issue with this story! It just doesn’t have enough. Hopefully you won’t get bored and drop it. Great job. I'm too lazy to make this 140 characters.
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