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Dastaan
DastaanLv56yr
2018-07-18 00:37

Okay so. I like the idea of the apocalypse (in story form) but you seriously need to make a better language edit before you post it. The character is good and I see potential so good luck!! And hope to see more chapters from you.

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Thank for your review, as for the language it was because sometime l was confused on which word l should use because the translator that l use (google translate) give me so many word, and l can't diferentiate between norm and verb when l write so it become like. I also trying using proofread but it can only proofread one word. That was one of the few reason that l can't fix right now.

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