Hello it is my first time writing so i would appreciate any support and criticism. I will try to update as much as possible. Thanks for reading my novel.
Red_Tempest
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LIKETut tut tut. An emperor needs a harem... though honestly, if the harem ends up with not enough character development, then no harem is better.
Red_Tempest:Umm.. I am not sure yet. Honestly i am not a big fan of harems.
I . . . don't even know how you thought that would convince someone, but please, try to improve your grammar and/or spelling. Also, an emperor does not need a harem, sometimes a harem isn't something that a story needs, hell, most of the time I can't stand a harem if it is just forced together because "Oh, a harem is so good and it makes men want to read the story more". And that is just not a good reason for its inclusion in a story.
Heaveah:omg make this harem cause emperor need big harem but lot of scene with mogul ********* ***** cause i like cause i don’t thhings romance is good only harem o make harem ******* ***** **** ************** it is webster’s ok
Magic_Outlaw:I . . . don't even know how you thought that would convince someone, but please, try to improve your grammar and/or spelling. Also, an emperor does not need a harem, sometimes a harem isn't something that a story needs, hell, most of the time I can't stand a harem if it is just forced together because "Oh, a harem is so good and it makes men want to read the story more". And that is just not a good reason for its inclusion in a story.