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Red_Tempest
Red_TempestAuthor6yr
2018-07-08 04:16

Hello it is my first time writing so i would appreciate any support and criticism. I will try to update as much as possible. Thanks for reading my novel.

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Mayankraj2602
Mayankraj2602Lv11

You are doing pretty awesome till now. It's pretty awesome and but just rush the story and please don't drop it . Since you have started it you should take it to the end.

Ferdous
FerdousLv6

Your story plot is good you should try to finish the novel.

Ferdous
FerdousLv6

Try to update more chapter

freakmedic
freakmedicLv5

author can i ask a question how many girls is in the harem

Red_Tempest
Red_TempestAuthor

Umm.. I am not sure yet. Honestly i am not a big fan of harems.

freakmedic:author can i ask a question how many girls is in the harem
FourEyes
FourEyesLv12

Hello Author, ia this modern or cultivation world?

Red_Tempest
Red_TempestAuthor

modern world with mc having special powers

FourEyes:Hello Author, ia this modern or cultivation world?
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

is there a harem in this novel? and douse he do the deed

Lkjfdsay1
Lkjfdsay1Lv10

Tut tut tut. An emperor needs a harem... though honestly, if the harem ends up with not enough character development, then no harem is better.

Red_Tempest:Umm.. I am not sure yet. Honestly i am not a big fan of harems.
voidgod
voidgodLv6

Don't make this into a harem story, please!?

Red_Tempest:Umm.. I am not sure yet. Honestly i am not a big fan of harems.
Heaveah
HeaveahLv5

omg make this harem cause emperor need big harem but lot of scene with mogul ********* ***** cause i like cause i don’t thhings romance is good only harem o make harem ******* ***** **** ************** it is webster’s ok

Severed_law
Severed_lawLv14

how many chapters per week will you be releasing ,very much enjoying it right this novel , do you have a schedule yet .

immortalwriter2
immortalwriter2Lv4

i really love this novel thank for creating it

krito_tomazu
krito_tomazuLv5

Good story your doing pretty awesome and please don't drop this story i like it very much

Magic_Outlaw
Magic_OutlawLv4

I . . . don't even know how you thought that would convince someone, but please, try to improve your grammar and/or spelling. Also, an emperor does not need a harem, sometimes a harem isn't something that a story needs, hell, most of the time I can't stand a harem if it is just forced together because "Oh, a harem is so good and it makes men want to read the story more". And that is just not a good reason for its inclusion in a story.

Heaveah:omg make this harem cause emperor need big harem but lot of scene with mogul ********* ***** cause i like cause i don’t thhings romance is good only harem o make harem ******* ***** **** ************** it is webster’s ok
NoKannaNoLife
NoKannaNoLifeLv5

My spider senses are tingling, do I sense missing chapters.

chakib
chakibLv6

Plz post the next chapters it has been a long period of time that you didn’t upadate your novel So make it quick And thank you

UmbraRose
UmbraRoseLv14

My dude, don't drop this novel. I had to read read up to ch 27 twice because I enjoyed it. Makes me want to have a system like that

Heaveah
HeaveahLv5

It was obviously a troll :/

Magic_Outlaw:I . . . don't even know how you thought that would convince someone, but please, try to improve your grammar and/or spelling. Also, an emperor does not need a harem, sometimes a harem isn't something that a story needs, hell, most of the time I can't stand a harem if it is just forced together because "Oh, a harem is so good and it makes men want to read the story more". And that is just not a good reason for its inclusion in a story.
Magic_Outlaw
Magic_OutlawLv4

You never know with some people.

Heaveah:It was obviously a troll :/
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