Overall from what I have just read, it is a good or should I say excellent story line with the typical ***** dumb MC. It can be improved further by adding more description about the character, the Edea background. However I really look forward the the story development from you author. Keep the hard work and please take care of the quality. I don't want the quality to deteriorate overtime. I suggest that even though it takes longer to release it, just keep the quality maintained.
Ruruci
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