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Fukai1Ferio
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2019-09-06 07:54

I really liked the novel so I would like to know if the novel will continue because it is a very interesting novel and because it is different from other novels I was on my way to being one of my favorite novels. So was dropped or not?

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Kasaix
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No I didnt drop it. There are some stuff going on IRL. IF you read the author's notes I think you must have seen the one where I said I quit my job. After that I kinda went on another job hunt and found one as an English teacher for some private language school. Then I had to teach kids basic level english in summer, deal with my master's application etc. Then the owner of the flat I am staying sold the flat and I had to look for a new apartment. All in all it was a hectic summer I mean I allready updated like 2 to 3 times a week so with all this I couldnt even find the time to do that. Well rather than time since writing this novel is like a hobby to me I kinda forgot? Now that you remind me though I think I can push out another chapter tomorrow or the day after? Anyway if anyone else is reading this when i havent updated for a long time just post a comment or review or something to remind me cuz there is ahigh chance that I forgot to for IRL reasons. Anyway thx for reading my novel :3

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A very typical light-novel style work, somewhat reminded me of the Japanese anime RE:CREATERS but I don't think they are the same except for the part they are all about fictional characters trying to break the fourth wall and get in touch with their creators (Didn't watch the anime myself only heard about it so I'm not really sure). There's a maturity and a degree of completion in author's writing style, so I assume the writer either read lots of light novels like the MC or practiced writing them for some time already, and the language is simple and very easy to read--though may lack some sort of characteristic/personality in there and seem a little plain, but it doesn't dampen much of the reading experience so it's not really a big problem, the writer may work on it if he wishes to better his writing than just "light-novel style". There are lots of casual and daily usage of language like abbreviation in the text, but in this case since it's a light novel whose MC and most characters are of young generations, this I would rather call a merit instead of a disadvantage, for it adds some realness from life into the fiction, same for the details of how otaku people like MC form up together in a club, organize those RP activities and interact with each other, showing that author is clearly someone in this circle. As for advice I don't really have much to give, because clearly the author positioned his work to be a light novel and in this sense it is already rather well-written: the writing quality is above the standard, the plots are progressing in a very proper pace, the characters are presented...well not to say very vividly but in a very comic way. Though for people who are already very into Japanese light novel/manga/anime for a long time, the story, setting and characters won't be that original, but still because it's fairly written, it should still be enjoyable to read. The only thing I could ask--besides double check some minor typing mistakes--is to step beyond the light novel circle and add something more unique and unseen into the work. It is only an impression I got intuitively from the text so not necessarily correct, but it seems that the author is the type of people who's very much in-in in one circle (or one type of circles) of hobbies and social contacts, and that kind of feature also reflects in the text--it seems to be created solely for the light novel circle and doesn't really show any intention of doing anything else. Of course it's not a bad thing--it is something everyone has an "expertise" would do and only people who have some sort of "expertise" are interesting, but to stay in one place for too long will make it harder to think outside of the box and create something of fundamental originality. P.S. A boy I'm having a crush in college right now is called Max XD

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