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Lemni
LemniLv126yr
2018-07-18 22:35

Hello there miss /mister author your novel is nice protagonist is not typical retard like in most novels his character is consistent and good the story for noe is great just maybe the world details or more character detail about looks and such would be truly great because many novels are missin on those i cant give any more of a review as there are not many chaps fpr now just point from reader dont lech mc and side chars degenerate into teenager or whatever just for plot free scene , look into details of character like looks shape and blah blah you are not stupid so you know yourself and for example detail of fauna in forest no need to do it like lunatic but base color and forest setup dunno what those secter grounds even look like. Keep up your spirit and imagination its painfull to see novels go to crap with their potential whis is limited only by fantazy. With best regards to you.

Super Bot (Ragnarök System)

RubyKing
4.4
22 Chs

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RubyKing
RubyKingAuthor

Hi, i am the author! I just wanted to ask... who played or still plays ragnarok? I wouldn't say that this story is a ragnarok fan-fiction, but since i use a game-based system, i thought it was better to mark it as fan-fiction. the system, classes and some skills are taken from the game, but the whole background of the story is original. Anyway, I hope you have fun!

6yr

Lailike
LailikeLv3

I really like this! more chapters please............................................................................................................................................................................ and no harem for god's sake

6yr
UndeadSage
UndeadSageLv5

AUTHOR-san!! Dude you awesome! IN A NUT: MC was re:inced in a new body in a CULTIVATION WORLD with 2 love interests(that's new).. with cliches happening around him and not TO him (if u know what I mean).. REVIEW: stop wasting your time on reviews and START READING ALREADY!!!

6yr
Mouchan
MouchanLv3

seems like Interesting! need more plss!! seems like Interesting! need more plss!!seems like Interesting! need more plss!!seems like Interesting! need more plss!!seems like Interesting! need more plss!!

6yr
Zendrix
ZendrixLv4

Why haven't you uploaded in so long. I like the story and how you go about the main character. Also he isn't dumb and goes I will beat people who are op because they are op he goes I need to consolidate and think.

6yr
HeartFire2
HeartFire2Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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Wagn
WagnLv5

I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =) I liked the idea more chapters =)

6yr
njnkno
njnknoLv3

this story seems to have potential keep up the good work mate .................................................................................

6yr
Lindsy_newton
Lindsy_newtonLv3

Wow I love this story 🤩 it's captures the readers attention and I just wanna keep reading more and more cause the more I read the more interesting it becomes .

2yr
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