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2018-08-08 03:42

I really like how the story is progressing. It is so intriguing I don't want to put it down and I can't wait for more updates. Sometimes the words can get a little jumbled but not to bad where you cant understand it.

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Thanks a bunch for the positive review. Not to long ago I ended up get a concussion and about thirty seconds latter got a second one while playing rugby. Because of this I am having some problems with words and other cognitive stuff because of how sever my concussions were. If its ever jumbled or you want me to re-write a bit please just let me know in the comment section

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