*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: try to make an update schedule, even if to accomplish it you need to post a little less often, and schedule the release. Also, is there any world background in the first 5 chapters? I have not really seen it, and there are only few places whereas it could have been placed and actually added to the story.;,;. Positive Feedback: Unique plot concept, and well done plot and character development thus far.;,;. I also have no complaints for writing quality.;,;. Personal Feedback: This story is well done, It just does not suit my taste, therefore I will not be reading further.;,;. Keep up the good work.;,;. Scores: WQ 5/5 SoU 4/5 SD 5/5 CD 5/5 WB 4/5
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