Review Detail of Mrtokkadi in The War That Transcends Timelines!

Item: The War That Transcends Timelines!
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

MrtokkadiLv45yrMrtokkadi

I like the novel But it just that many of the developmentbof the novel is missing. You should develop more of thr storyline for the marshall

Chaos_Overseer

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Chaos_OverseerAuthorChaos_Overseer

Could you maybe give a bit more details on what you mean so that I could improve?

5yr

MrtokkadiLv4Mrtokkadi

I mean like the background storyline.. Like who is shadow and how come he is working with the marshall like that

5yr

Chaos_OverseerAuthorChaos_Overseer

There was a part on shadow, where they found him and recruited.

Mrtokkadi:I mean like the background storyline.. Like who is shadow and how come he is working with the marshall like that

5yr

MrtokkadiLv4Mrtokkadi

Tqhere is..hmm i must have missed it

Chaos_Overseer:There was a part on shadow, where they found him and recruited.

5yr

Armageddon1999Lv4Armageddon1999

What development is missing, I mean Shadow did get a major slab of meat attached to its background xD

Mrtokkadi:Tqhere is..hmm i must have missed it

5yr