A decent novel all in all. However, there are quite a few of internal consistency issues and logic failures. This mostly stems from the author not going back and reading what he alreafy wrote occasionally or not taking notes. For example there is in the last two or three chapters where the novel talks about how humans and greyson could only dream of living that long. The problem? Greyson is not human. He is a tri-racial mix of elf, dragon, and human. Quad if you count the guy who injected his own bloodline into Greyson. On top of that he has the life contract with Lucius and the fact mages aren't normal humans and their aging already slows down even if he was just a human. There are a bunch more inconsistencies if your observant you can catch them. They are fairly minor though.
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