Review Detail of Tasear in Genius Seventh Prince

Sorry to hear that you felt this way :( But I appreciate the review even if it is to criticize. I know I still have a ways to go, as this is my first novel ever. Thanks for your words, gives me more to reflect on moving forward.

Yes I do appericate your commitment and didn't want to disappoint you, but I thought at least I could leave some advice. I liked the story and concept was interesting though overpowered. It just felt like it was missing some important things. The characters need personality quirks, and postive and negative triats so they can be rememberable. The main character backstory felt forgotten along the way. I don't get why mystery of 7 colors of eyes was revaeled so soon. It ruined what you had going on in background. Also main character just seems to boring after awhile. Why does he know everything? What fun is it to see him do things with ease? Learning 7 things at once should make readers feel a deep struggle to organize content in head along with feeling tried. I wouldn't be surprised if One could confuse a spell or two. Maybe this would lead to something dangerous or wonderful? Also it's disappointing theirs no foreshadowing about him learning his past or something might be more than ordination with him, not just a rare occurrence. So yeah my suggestion is think about world more you developes and let it grow more.

Hey, you know I really took your advice to heart and tried it out in my more recent writing. I wanted the novel to be longer so I only just started foreshadowing more about his past and other things. He isn't really overpowered either but slowly learning along the way. As the first person to really say some things, I would really hope that if you have some time you could check out the newer chapters and tell me what you think. There's still a lot of room for improvement and some mistakes maybe, but I hope that you see improvement. Thanks~ ^^

Happy to hesr you continue on your journey as a writee.

Hello author sama, as i am reading this novel, i feel like i journeyed with the mc. I like every characters, even those cliche's young masters 😁 (except for those annoying female characters that you keep on adding). I wonder maybe it is a hint for a romance/harem in the future? I just wanna know in advance because, honestly i had dropped every adventure novels that i have read that has romance/harem. Hopefully you could reply as soon as you read this. Thank you fir the hard work! Fighting👊!!! (I'll stop reading for now, until i got confirmation from you)

Hello author sama, as i am reading this novel, i feel like i journeyed with the mc. I like every characters, even those cliche's young masters 😁 (except for those annoying female characters that you keep on adding). I wonder maybe it is a hint for a romance/harem in the future? I just wanna know in advance because, honestly i had dropped every adventure novels that i have read that has romance/harem. Hopefully you could reply as soon as you read this. Thank you fir the hard work! Fighting👊!!! (I'll stop reading for now, until i got confirmation from you)

Hello, thank you for your nice words! This will NOT be a harem novel. I am not a fan of them. He will only have one love interest. Hopefully you will keep reading!