Review Detail of Exodus_of_Time in Stronghold In The Apocalypse

It's just a bad piece of literature (if one can call it that). The grammar, the tenses, and the sentence structure is bad and needs revising. The objectification of women is bad and a dumb choice. The logic behind the system and the different things in the world is flawed and inconsistent. E.g guns made pre-WW2 era works but any post-WW2 gun does, somehow, not work. (+The systems guns work?) The principle behind them is pretty much the same for the two sides. The units of measurement is not well planned. In other words, I do not recommend you read this novel if you don't want to lose brain cells.