Review Detail of BorrowedDreams in Lord of Mysteries

This LN has many strong points: - Well made world building. - Fascinating power system. - Thrilling and grounded plot. - Well designed and fleshed characters. - Properly excecuted plot twists. - Good use of major powers to change the tides of events instead of the commonly forced plot armor / Deus ex machina. in terms of LN quality, Lord kf the mysteries reach a high level thanks to the high degree of the argument and the creativity of the author to give form to the fantastical elements in a grim and thrilling context that combine the usual class sustem power with the cosmic horror genre, and the well written cheracters and the wau they develop in this fantastic world make it a great reading experience, I can blindly recommend this LN for anyone with decent standards. However!, it has some weak points as well that can't bee overlook: - Sometimes, the MC is cringe, you can really tell that there are a few moments that are way too cringe, and I don't like to use this word, but is the most appropriate to describe the feeling. - The author overuse some words or reference every once in a while during the length of am arc, take for example, since the chapter 1000+, he had been using "On the one gand [this]... On the other hand [that]....", and used it almost every two chapters, getting me really annoyed. and that's why, I give 5 starts to all score except writing quality, grammatical consistency is important for a proper immersion in lecture and poor writing will damage the quality of the work, regardless of the good quality of the content.