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2018-06-28 17:35

I don't know of the author would read this but... I would like to say that this book is actually interesting. Though the narration is not the best, it has its own charm in it. I like the aura surrounding while reading your book. I feel like this could be a popular novel in the future. Just work on some spaces and capitalizations, you will do good in the future :)

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Thank you! I'll try my best. And if I could trouble you, can you be more detail on the capitalization and spaces? Thank you

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