Review Detail of White_Swordman in The Ninth Reincarnation

First of all i have to say you did a good jop in the writing quality as beside some minor issues overall is good but character design i feel its somehow messed up as also i know what u want us readers to know and got ur message but some may not and then the world background also is somehow believable and convincing but still the world is hidden so much that exception for what u showed which is nothing much in my opinion so reveal about the overall situation about the world so that i know where and when and what is going on and understand and then i,m not discouraging u but u asked for advice and here i am so i loved ur novel and can feel the potential to be a good one so work hard young daoist and give us another good mc and then thanks for this lovely novel consideration for u just beginning. By the wasy this opinion is for.now and it may change later on depending on how the novel goes.