Review Detail of standinflamename in Rise of The Undead Legion

I enjoyed the story so far more than almost anything I’ve read on this site before. The writing is really good, despite spelling errors I remember from the early chapters. The MC is more than 2-dimensional and the girl in the story is more than just a prop. I like it better than RotSSG from a character point of view. The world building is really good, if you can ignore the idea of actually making money from the game, which seems to be a common, and silly, trope. But given that one impossible, thing, the rest makes sense and is a lot of fun.