Review Detail of CelestialBirdthing in Rise of The Undead Legion
Review detail
I am very excited for more of this. The novel is certainly not the best, but it’s different. There are many vrmmorpg novels out there, among them I’ve tried quite a few, and this one is different to all I know of, it’s new and fresh. Many aspects are reminiscent to other works, the mc against almost everyone else, even the ‘secret’ race & class have been done before, however in contrast to other I find this one much more developed (note that I’m not omniscient and haven’t read them all). I realize that I’m writing a bit to much, I’m not making a proper reviret and I’ll just round it off by mentioning my favoriter thing about the novel. The hierarchical system that mc is apart of, and how he moves through it it, the different ranks give a feeling of an actual organised force, and that is a big plus, I imagine the mc in the future overwhelming and crushing the weak mortals with a gigantic army of skeletons, it’s truly exhilarating.
Rise of The Undead Legion
Biako
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Biako:Your wishe shall be granted, The Dead shall rise, and all the living shall tremble in fear, for we are a legion.
Biako:Your wishe shall be granted, The Dead shall rise, and all the living shall tremble in fear, for we are a legion.
So I have not read the novel, I probably will not unless I have nothing else to read. From what I read through multiple reviews you attempting a damn good thing to change up the generic mmorpg genre. However, people also stated that you add a lot of details, maybe, too many. This in turn caused you to make too many plot holes, it is very hard to have too many details without taking notes of them. I hope, if you are planning on either continuing this or restarting it, you take notes. I am not bashing you in anyway, just giving some advice since you clearly have a great idea, wish you luck.
Biako:Your wishe shall be granted, The Dead shall rise, and all the living shall tremble in fear, for we are a legion.
