A poorly written good story. There are too many grammar and present/past tense mistakes. Sometimes the phrase won't have any meaning and you'll have to try to guess what the author meant. As for the story he usually rushes with the story part but is really slow and descriptive with the crafting part, which some might like and other might think is tecnobabble (like me). Nevertheless, these rushed parts are still interesting and coupled with the MC upgrade ability, made for a nice story. The author should cut a little on the crafting part and improve more the plot with interesting events in the sect with other people or ****** more adventures. You should also add more challenge and stick to your power ranks. The MC wins too easily and too over his own level. Him as a rank 1 killing rank 19 is quite ridiculous and undermines your own system. Also there are some really stupid plot devices like Strong Cultivators not interfering in an attack on the city by bandits because it's an attack made by the young generation and they don't want to get involved because of pride, the old can't fight the young or something. I facepalmed when I read this and almost dropped.
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I agree on your main point but not necessarily in the solutions. Good review of this book overall.
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