Review Detail of La6 in The Upgrade/ Sect/ Anime System

Look what I just read completely contradicts what I read you have above average writing and I like this even with just the first chapter believe in yourself man

Im sure you will doing good. From what i saw you write really good. I hope this will be another great novel on this site :) Good Luck!!

Keep going it’s very good till now, don’t be afraid if need stop a few days for more ideas, better w8 of getting quality drop ❤️

Eu vou ler,sou brasileiro,bom trabalho autor,tomara que seja uma boa história...

Man just keep going it is verry good and i don't care if its your first book, Just goodluck and may the force be with you XD.

the story is good, just the writing is flawed. if you want, then i could give you an email and will correct a few things from chapters. (already out chapters because i sometimes have very little time and i can just help you boost the quality a little.)

sure if you want to do it

mterel344@gmail.com you can send old chapter files or something and i will go over them.

okay ill send them to you

I sent you Chapter 1-22

Keep it up👍

Its totally a turn off for me if you are just 14. Whispers 'hide it, remove it'.