I really liked the beginning but even an overpowered mc has to have a dynamic in his reasoning. I really lost my "appetite" when he just started to kill those sects. I think you should erase those chapters and go back to the storyline before. Being overpowered or just having no sense for humility is not the same. Seems you thought posting is more important than writing a good idea. Maybe get some proofreaders who can tell you when it gets boring.
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