Review Detail of WaterArmySect in The Upgrade/ Sect/ Anime System
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Can u change it from 1st perspective to 3rd? I add in the library for now.. Hope it will changed later.. If not.. Then too bad.. I just dont get used for story with 1st perspective..
The Upgrade/ Sect/ Anime System
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Reading the comments just to figure out if the change in POV was requested or random. I am just starting this series and just read the chapter when the POV switches. If I could make one suggestion? I like these stories that have kind of an RPG character sheet element to them, but very few writers seem to make sure the spacing is correct so it is easy to read as a character sheet. I.e. Name:Eric Age:19 Level:Noob Instead of like a character sheet Name: Eric Age: 19 Level: Boss Also it would not be a bad idea to list the characters' sheet at the end of each chapter to keep track of their stats and skills as the story goes on. Keep up the good work
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