I like the way you are keeping the tone of the story "real and intense" without any silliness. It is like reading a real action light novel. I love the character development and everything seems balanced in an OP way (sorry didn't know how else to say it). Every "perk/plot armor" is based off something plausible due to clan, bloodline, etc... and it is grown (some quick some slow) which is a part of what I mean by "balanced OP". Great story and thank you for giving it your full attention (I saw where you put your other story on Hiatus due to this one)!
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