Review Detail of Astolfo_My_Waifu in NARUTO SAGA

Well (whatever i say is for the author ) ...i can't say this is bad or good the most accurate would be if i said it is mediocre but its not mediocre for other readers but only me ... first the plot is overused since i have spent alot of time in fanfictions from here and other places system and naruto as the mc is an overused plot nonetheless...second is the writing quality which is kinda bad from the point of comfortable reading ... there is no Caps no commas no closure etc. (Fix this for more comfortable read). The chapters are too short maybe the shortest chapters i have ever read in this site ... this are most of the obvious flaws since i dont like to search deep into this novel but good try at making your first novel ..Good luck