Grammar I quite bad at times and there are no letters capitalized. The names of the people talking are often mixed up. There are also some details missing that are later brought up (minor details). While this doesn't make the story unreadable it does make it quite a bit harder to read. The premise of the story itself is good, and I can never rate a system novel too badly, since they're my favorite.
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