Very nice story development........... keep up the good work........ .and ignore the negative comments........ . They just want some attention............... Ill keep supporting your work..you have potential.trust my words.you have potential in Fan-fic novel...as good as "God of soul system", "holistic fantasy" very good as those..

Another good naruto fanfic well its being original is one of good point from this series although you can fix some grammar well im just hoping you dont drop this one

Great bro this one is one of the best!!! ......................................................................................................................................

very good story...i like story about naruto...so this novel give me excited feeling when i read....so keep going ...don t give reader waiting...and i wainting for another chapter...faster faster

Is rly nice novel but the chapter little bit short. Thanks for the hard work. ** :need more chapters chapter chapters chapter chapter chapters chapter bye bye bye bye bye

NARUTO SAGA: LAND OF WAVES basically. 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140

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What the hell ? "although he can not change the whole story but he still needs to save the life of those who are precious to him like jiraya, third, Neji and so on." ??????? This guy has no reason to save them ! At wich moment did he even talk with them !!! How can you consider someone you don't even know as a precious to you ?? It's completly incoherent ! Big problem there, and i'm saying big because it's RReally the case

Grammar I quite bad at times and there are no letters capitalized. The names of the people talking are often mixed up. There are also some details missing that are later brought up (minor details). While this doesn't make the story unreadable it does make it quite a bit harder to read. The premise of the story itself is good, and I can never rate a system novel too badly, since they're my favorite.

I like the story so far, but I would like to offer proofreading/adjustments for the grammar & punctuation. Lack of capital letters & lots of small mistakes are made and it would be an easier read if they were corrected. The mistakes are not the type that make it too annoying for me to bother reading the story though, so consider yourself among my prefered 30% of fanfiction writers, keep it up!