Review Detail of doodlyy in A Lazy Man's Adventure (Completed)
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i have read through 15 or so chapters and one thing that i kept on thinking was 'The grammer is soo bad!!'... Author should really get an editor and not use google translator, at least grammarly. Another thing is that this novel is kinda a wish fulfillment novel where author made the Mc background Tooooo OP... Like how the fck does his parents reach 94 and 96 ranked doulo when they are only 36 and below???? The only good thing is that it uplouds frequently from what i could see. Author should research a little bit about soul land before making this novel
A Lazy Man's Adventure (Completed)
PandaWanKenobi
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Uuuuhh this is not google translation, I’m just really bad in english even with grammarly.. because what you are reading is already edited by the grammarly...... soooo *lowering head in shame* also its possible for his parent to be title douluo at their age..... i mean Tang san became one at the age of 25.......It just means his parents had been through a lot of life and death situation at least in my ideas.
i know it's possible but with their talents, when MC gets to 20 or smth, they gonna be a God or smth... well thanks for replying to this review since not many authors do that, and i recommend using multiple word correction apps. i use google docs for it so i suggest using grammarly then copy + paste it to google doc so you can get a better wording
PandaWanKenobi:Uuuuhh this is not google translation, I’m just really bad in english even with grammarly.. because what you are reading is already edited by the grammarly...... soooo *lowering head in shame* also its possible for his parent to be title douluo at their age..... i mean Tang san became one at the age of 25.......It just means his parents had been through a lot of life and death situation at least in my ideas.
i know it's possible but with their talents, when MC gets to 20 or smth, they gonna be a God or smth... well thanks for replying to this review since not many authors do that, and i recommend using multiple word correction apps. i use google docs for it so i suggest using grammarly then copy + paste it to google doc so you can get a better wording
PandaWanKenobi:Uuuuhh this is not google translation, I’m just really bad in english even with grammarly.. because what you are reading is already edited by the grammarly...... soooo *lowering head in shame* also its possible for his parent to be title douluo at their age..... i mean Tang san became one at the age of 25.......It just means his parents had been through a lot of life and death situation at least in my ideas.
PandaWanKenobi:Uuuuhh this is not google translation, I’m just really bad in english even with grammarly.. because what you are reading is already edited by the grammarly...... soooo *lowering head in shame* also its possible for his parent to be title douluo at their age..... i mean Tang san became one at the age of 25.......It just means his parents had been through a lot of life and death situation at least in my ideas.
dude he can... remember his excuse? My plot would be making him fall above Qian Renxue when the time comes......just like cultivation worlds does.... It takes a persisting year or so to create love out of something.....
TrueImmortalDevil:You left Qian Renxue in the first world lol she never became a lover
Are we still getting Qian Renxue?? I'm dying laughing because I am from the far future where the Mc already has grown kids. So I was wondering, are we still getting Qian Renxue now that the Doulou world's time has been restarted? I mean, why not.
PandaWanKenobi:dude he can... remember his excuse? My plot would be making him fall above Qian Renxue when the time comes......just like cultivation worlds does.... It takes a persisting year or so to create love out of something.....
panda is still trying to create a fool proof plan to make that happen even though the chances is 10 percent, but for the moment, Panda is in hiatus mode. because of final exam reviews and revising the research papers.. Panda apologize for not uploading as of the moment, since Panda is desperate in passing.
Feign_God:Are we still getting Qian Renxue?? I'm dying laughing because I am from the far future where the Mc already has grown kids. So I was wondering, are we still getting Qian Renxue now that the Doulou world's time has been restarted? I mean, why not.
Same, I got a final on the 20th, been studying for it. Good Luck to both of us. I would actually not mind adding Qian Renxue because the ending of the novel got really emotional because we get to know the whole story behind why her mother hates her and all that took a toll on the heart.
PandaWanKenobi:panda is still trying to create a fool proof plan to make that happen even though the chances is 10 percent, but for the moment, Panda is in hiatus mode. because of final exam reviews and revising the research papers.. Panda apologize for not uploading as of the moment, since Panda is desperate in passing.
Ahhh... Para qué más amantes, si Ada casi ni sale en la novela, por lo general se menciona como que está ocupada con otra cosa y listo. Dejo el libro llegue hasta el comienzo del tercer acto - fate/zero-... Leí tu comentario y lo dejo difinitivamente, ya me basta con una esposa trofeo, no necesito 2 en mi lectura. Otra cosa, el tipo se supone que es perezoso, ¿dónde se quedó la pereza en el arco n°2? En el primer mundo si cumplió con la característica supuestamente esencial en la novela (hasta su título enmarca algo de la trama), pero luego cambias al segundo arco y todo se fue a la ******. Gracias de verdad me entretuve con el primer arco, aunque no tanto, siempre estuve esperando pensando que mejoraría y así me mantuve, pero no.
PandaWanKenobi:Only two lovers, Ada and Qian Renxue.....