Review Detail of GRoy in Level-Up Hitman

Ok bro. I just finished reading first 72ch. Italiano?? :) good for you. I wish to see the end of this novel, but i really think you will never finish. Why? --- the pace of the novel is at 🐌 speed. Very, very slow. --- in first 70ch nothing much happened. In this style, he will finish the first planet in....1000ch? --- the story will take place on 9 planets, so , we should expect about 9000ch ? U're ambitiously, i like it. But try to stay true. --- the problem is that you give too much details , for everything, and you have many "empty" chapters. This is what u need to work off. The novel has a unique flavor, and i like it very much. I love the MC, the world, the monsters. Probably, like many others, you dream to be a good author. But it is not easy. And all of them started with short novels, 400-500-700ch. This is what you need to look for, the end goal, to finish this story. If you can not finish it, you will go to the other side, the side where are a lot of authors who gone in hiatus, and almost nobody will read another novel of them. Back to topic, is a good story, a nice flavor, finally i see the diference between 10 Int and 1000 Int. Not just another stat thrown there. Ok. Make a plan for the novel. A plan where you actually see the final product. Try to limit the details, the explanations , i think everyone knows what the **** is "heal" and "blink". It is not the first time when we see it.Don't try to make a long novel. U need a fan base. Fan base are made with finished novels. I hope you will read this 😁 . I really like your work. Sorry for my english, but i hope that u got my message. ✌🏻