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Review Detail of ShadowMoonDragon in The Dark Lord

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ShadowMoonDragon
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Writing quality 4/5 its sentence structure and grammar are up there compared to the majority of originals on this website. Stability of updates is meh 2/5 because its been two weeks since a chapters been added to the novel. Story development is 2/5 it goes to fast feels rushed it also throws you right in. Character design 2/5 we know next to NOTHING about the mc some stats his name and that he died and was once more given life through a egg. Another example of what we know is he gets bloodlines and is unfazed about it this example also applies to world background. World background 2/5 was going to give it a 1/5 but i'm feeling generous we know only 2 things ROUGHLY about the world we don't know why they are there or how they work to few chapters. #1 beast there are beast... Thats it. #2 bloodlines and there are 4 types... Thats also it -_- . Review aside it's a pretty decent novel besides a few meh-_- here and there if the author redos the novel by adding in the mc past roughly some more concrete info on bloodlines and info throughout the story about beasts and flashbacks to the mc's past here and there this novel could be worth reading to the majority and be in the top100 originals easy maybe earn the author some $

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The Dark Lord

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Wungier
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I saw this review and I was thinking if you could give one for my novel it would be great. :D (Nice review BTW)