Invest in a grammar checker, like Word or something it would improve the flow considerably because currently it feels jumbled up and hard to read. Story doesn’t seem bad though.
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LIKEShade11224:I tend to try to be extremely critical when it comes to the stars because the review system seems to be skewed in the fact that everyone who leaves a review always gives 5 stars if they like it a little rather than being realistic, don’t worry it won’t really affect your rating.
fkjgfkf:take it as an incentive author, it really isn't hard to get something to check for grammar mistakes (which your novel is riddled with and is dreadfully painful to read no matter how good the story itself might be)
What is the plagiarism you are talking about? Me saying name that i shouldn't have? Or the name of a proofreader?
Shade11224:Grammarly it’s really good and even checks for plagiarism I think
Shade11224:Lol no it’s just when you quote someone or steal excerpts from articles or other sources online without properly quoting them and I don’t think you have plagiarized anything it was just a cool feature of it lol. It’s mainly for just checking your grammar, punctuation and spelling.