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Senior_Nepuko
Senior_NepukoLv65yrSenior_Nepuko

-Writing quality : No grammatical errors, and nice style of writing. -Updates : There never was a single day without an update, kudos author. -Story Developement : Great. I won't expand much on the subject, lest there'll be spoilers, but all I can say is that it's interesting. Don't be turned off by the seemingly slow pace at the very early chapters tho. It has a nice steady pace, with no bullsh*t illogical power-ups every damn chapter for no apparent logical reason.(glances at a certain Shisui Reincarnation atg fic), and everything has an explanation. Everything is logical or at least have a bit of that in it. There's no : "Why do I have this power? Because. Why does it work like that? B.E.C.A.U.S.E." In short it's not a "wish fulfillement" type fic. It's a bit similar to HN1F too, as the MC is not solo and has a clan to take care of too, tho it may not be THAT obvious in the beginning XD. Going by the readers reactions (and my self), I can safely say that you can expect hype :D. See for yourself for the rest :) -Character Design : No one-dimensional characters. Characters are well portrayed, the interactions are meaningful and most importantly the characters stay true to how they were portrayed (Glances again at a certain Shisui atg fic -_-). -World Background : Not much can really be said about this since it's already been established in atg. Tho the authors added some bits in it ;) In short it's a great fic with a lot of potential. The only reason why it hasn't claimed it's place in the top 20/10 is that Nurarihyon is not THAT popular, so readers are not immediately attracted. They'll say something like : wtf are youkais doing in atg? I know since myself didn't begin to read this until I was VERY bored. Didn't regret this I assure you, a great read. And tho it's fan base might be small (for now), it's a devoted one this fic has. Please spread the name of this fic for others to discover this gem.

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Kurrei
KurreiLv4Kurrei

A very TRUE review. I was really surprise since most of the fanfics I read have lots of glaring grammars that made me drop them, yet this one is a true hidden gem. I haven't seen a single grammar mistake so far. The entire pace is extremely good, I've been following this novel since it was published. Kudos to author! More chapters!

Kurennai
KurennaiLv3Kurennai

I'm noooot sure about other novels but this one is really a great novel. Just the quality is perfect. Chapters are longer too.

JamBasic
JamBasicLv5JamBasic

I havent watch Nurarihyon and only knew it here. Thats how popular it is... Still read it though

Senior_Nepuko
Senior_NepukoLv6Senior_Nepuko

it's a decent anime

JamBasic:I havent watch Nurarihyon and only knew it here. Thats how popular it is... Still read it though
HeavenlyEagle
HeavenlyEagleLv2HeavenlyEagle

I found grammatical errors.

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

"In short it's not a "wish fulfillement" type fic. " Are you sure you reviewed the right novel? This is the definition of this novel- wish fulfillment- he gets a system (with a soul) and 10k points to start and free stuff and those points are enough for him to get weapons, armor and skills.

Senior_Nepuko
Senior_NepukoLv6Senior_Nepuko

That's a system novel. A wish fullfillement type is just that, a wish fulfillement, when there won't be a logical reasoning for the power-ups, and the 2nd you meet a love interest they want to get in your pants, etc. That's what I really meant when I said "wish fullfillement". But yeah if you look at it from another pov, this fic is too, and as is 99% other novels on this site XD

ErozothDraeor:"In short it's not a "wish fulfillement" type fic. " Are you sure you reviewed the right novel? This is the definition of this novel- wish fulfillment- he gets a system (with a soul) and 10k points to start and free stuff and those points are enough for him to get weapons, armor and skills.
MengHaoIsagod
MengHaoIsagodLv3MengHaoIsagod

How can you all have grammatical errors in your comments, and then talk about how a novel doesn't have any? Pretty contradicting if you ask me. And no, this novel has an extremely high amount of grammatical errors. You guys just have such bad grammar that you can't see them.

Senior_Nepuko
Senior_NepukoLv6Senior_Nepuko

Unless you just began commenting in your life, when you do so for a long period of time, you just don't care about your grammar. ANd I was writing on my phone. Plus, when I wrote that review, the novel didn't hane any, or had very few. And what you said totally besides the point, and is meaningless. The fact that my comment has "grammatical errors" have nothing to do with the story, that's just you wanting to sound interesting. It just shows your attention span.

MengHaoIsagod:How can you all have grammatical errors in your comments, and then talk about how a novel doesn't have any? Pretty contradicting if you ask me. And no, this novel has an extremely high amount of grammatical errors. You guys just have such bad grammar that you can't see them.
Senior_Nepuko
Senior_NepukoLv6Senior_Nepuko

And btw, by no grammatical errors, I meant no obvious or flagrant ones. Just for future dudes who'll reply just to say :" I found grammtical errors!" "You can't see them because your English lvl is too low", somthing like these.

Doxombre
DoxombreLv4Doxombre

Does it still constantly update?

Doxombre
DoxombreLv4Doxombre

Does it still constantly update?

Senior_Nepuko
Senior_NepukoLv6Senior_Nepuko

sadly no. Author in hospital last time we checked :/

Doxombre:Does it still constantly update?
Doxombre
DoxombreLv4Doxombre

What... ( T _ T )

Senior_Nepuko:sadly no. Author in hospital last time we checked :/
Silent_Moon
Silent_MoonLv12Silent_Moon

Why? What happened?

Senior_Nepuko:sadly no. Author in hospital last time we checked :/
Silent_Moon
Silent_MoonLv12Silent_Moon

Why? What happened?

Senior_Nepuko:sadly no. Author in hospital last time we checked :/
Senior_Nepuko
Senior_NepukoLv6Senior_Nepuko

I have no idea. He disappeared then.

Silent_Moon:Why? What happened?