Review Detail of Manacore in Reborn as a Saiyan
Review detail
Needs work on writing and phrases are all over the place good content but back wrapping the story itself could use a tweak and put Into view for the readers need more ground work to make the players pop into the game other wise it's like cardboard pop outs
Reborn as a Saiyan
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Liked it!
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Give mc a more worldly approach he is like somebody playing a vr with npc's relying on a "completed next mission" no sense of connection to his life it derives a dragon ball approach but lacks the mesh where they connects to give the story a unique concept
NovelReader101:What do u mean by player pop ??
You are probably going to need a balance breaker to reset your scale if you want to wide your world to have in depth heart griping soul shaking impact that changes not only the readers but takes even the characters to experience life in your "realm"
NovelReader101:What do u mean by player pop ??