Review Detail of demon86x in Gourmet Emperor : Building A Nation

ok so iam only a few chapters in but the writing is all ready starting to bug me. The reviews put writing quality at 4.5 stars which is bull the writing feels like it is done by a machine "Without hesitate, I'm entering the cave to protect my body from the rain./When I sit and arranging his harvest there, I feel some breeze flows from inside the cave./I'm thinking a while before my curiosity win and decide to explore further into the deeper cave. Boys tend to like adventure things right? Using my phone for lighting, I walk further and deeper into the cave. I didn't find anything strange during my exploration. When I'm still in the middle of my exploration, suddenly a tremor shaking the cave where I take shelter. "Oh no! earthquake!" I'm squatting with my hands covering his head from falling rocks. After a while, the tremors recedes and the situation becomes calm and peaceful again." now those are just some errors iam a english native language speaker so it bothers me alot when grammar switches alot when it isnt need all in good story bad writing translation