To have in this story the only good thing are the erotic rare scenes, some are SDM (sadomasochistic) and in the others, the boy remembers the girl who tortured him, the rest is too unreal, I already explain it in the comments of each chapter I read and since it is too long, I will copy the comments and I will put the number of the chapter, ahh and another good thing is the design of characters, first we have the protagonist where his life ends up being a piece of **** plus mental disorders, the crazy girl (Melanie), he friend of the protagonist which leads to misfortune and a new girl who wants to **** the protagonist knowing only for a day xd. Now the chapters:
Capitulo 1
You seriously think that this is scary, haha; and please, seriously you think that the candle will hurt so that one shouts, hahahaha, and the guy is masochistic, at least in the first chapter, this is PURE AND HARD SADOMASOCHI**
Chapter 2
Seriously the most intelligent detective is believed under the skies and is guided by a fucking book, just for this, he deserves everything that is happening to him and I keep saying that this guy is a masochist. And I keep saying that this is not horror and suspense, because only seeing the chapter, I know what will happen next, and as a gift, instead of giving me fear, I am amused by what is happening to this guy.
Chapter 3
This chapter has seemed funny to me, since the mc is a poor masochistic soul, he knows that they are going to kill him, but even so in his mind he only thinks about ***, how does this guy brain work alone with apples? What else is highlighted in this chapter are mainly the flashbacks between the dialogues, the rest is trash until now.
Chapter 4
Oh no poor man, now the only thing that I hope in the next chapters is that they sodomize hahahah, I smell it, so we emit the horror and supplant it eroticism SDM, the suspense throw it out the window and replace it with how unfortunate life of mc is in comparison to our life hahaha.
Chapter 5
This chapter has been darker than the previous one, but I emphasize only for men, because if a woman reads this, she just shrugs and says next, this girl is crazy, I guess he found out that the one who killed his dad when he discovered his identity when he arrives in the city , because if he has made a plan to bring it and everything, it would be too farfetched and already very done, that is boring and very intuitive.
Chapter 6
The part where he goes crazy, is abrupt, but believable since he was tortured, but when you told me that he had not been fed for two days, the unrealism went through the roof, we had a recount of what happened from the first chapter, the protagonist at the beginning had energy even to scream, also wanted to escape and finally he could joke, I mean, that his fatigue was not so much (mentally and physically), but now in chapter six, we find that a he has been tortured physically and mentally since he was proud and not eaten in two days, this guy should not even be able to talk and less scream, the only thing that can save him, is arguing that when he killed this crazy girl, he had an exaggerated adrenaline rush (god level), so much that he could use his full strength, in addition to moving the waist at the same time hahaha.
Ahh Finally this novel is not dark, it is an erotic SDM and the one that says otherwise is a pussy.
Chapter 7
Hahaha like an eagle, this is too funny, or please, in a second I recover your mental capacity, I mean, the physical and mental torture with the solo works for 10 minutes and then it becomes immune like in a game. And then it becomes unstable again and hits a cadaver hahah, I think it became a "little" mentally unstable, this is the only thing and I do not understand why they did not do psychological tests, since they always do them in these types of cases, but I remember that this story never made sense and it passed me. **: MC is a closet masochist.
Chapter 8
Ohh ****, this guy's love transcends the heavens, seriously, I guess it would happen if this guy gets his horns, he sure commits suicide, having the girl torture him, humiliation, contempt and the guy still said he loved her , although first he said that he hated her, this is confusing, well, it is the mentality of the mc, I still believe that it is better than this in a hospital for the mentally ill. And for the rest, 1 can serve to develop a character or 2 to give more misfortunes, which is the only thing I've read since I started this and I'm not complaining as I find everything that happens funny.
Chapter 9
Well I guess the protagonist has the frégoli mental disorder, that's horrible, because he's going to see people where you are not, and also he also hears voices in his head, what a sad life he leads, well, I hope you upload another chapter since the life of this guy is sad that even I laugh and not because it is bad, but because when I saw this novel, I read the reviews, said it was a dark story and was well done, but when I entered, I gave a lot Laughter, everything was too unreal and the guy was too stupid and had power up in rare moments hahaha. And I already knew what was going to happen before you wrote it, it was too intuitive.And seriously you're going to launch a book of this in amazon, ohhh this is too good, do it you have all my support hahaha.
