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Quiescent_Rumble
Quiescent_RumbleLv45yrQuiescent_Rumble

The story is different than others, so if you are tired to read the 10th clone of whatever, this is really a new story. The writing is good, not without errors, but it feels fluent. The basic idea of this system seems good so far (somewhere before chapter 10). I think this is a good book, it is just so that I don't like the "speed" of the story. Everything takes forever. Someone having ***... pages. Imagining something... pages. Walking somewhere... pages. Just going from his room to the bath can take many pages. So, I think it is a book many will like because there are many good points about it, but I personally do not like it. I still give 2 stars to story development, because - even when I don't like the speed of the story's progression - I like the new ideas of the story and I totally like the way the protagonist/author sees sexual activity as a normal activity instead of using "pervert this" and "pervert that" because someone likes some and/or is having ***.

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The Golden Watch Of Hypnosis

Gyihhuhu_

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Wilted_Bluebells
Wilted_BluebellsLv5Wilted_Bluebells

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Nicc
NiccLv5Nicc

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ari_edge
ari_edgeLv5ari_edge

Wow.... You know what... Is it me... Or does qidian corupting me... To find a joke in every novel review..... Sorry about that...

Gyihhuhu_
Gyihhuhu_AuthorGyihhuhu_

Just so you know, I've rewritten it. Could you please read it again and review, thanks.

Quiescent_Rumble
Quiescent_RumbleLv4Quiescent_Rumble

I tried today to read it again, but I get 404: https://***.webnovel.com/book/10928833305211205/29499775187480218 . Am I doing something wrong?

Gyihhuhu_:Just so you know, I've rewritten it. Could you please read it again and review, thanks.
Quiescent_Rumble
Quiescent_RumbleLv4Quiescent_Rumble

Ok, "continue" got me a 404, via index and first chapter, I just started reading again. To stupid to read book. Ouch :-)

Quiescent_Rumble:I tried today to read it again, but I get 404: https://***.webnovel.com/book/10928833305211205/29499775187480218 . Am I doing something wrong?