Review Detail of ArashiTenebris in Spaceship And Dragon

(let me borrow JONNNNEY review on other site, since he mostly nail it) As of chapter 17 it is a bit of rocky start, but it is an interesting premise both from the scifi perspective and the fantasy perspective. Reality hopping for the purpose of mining dark matter because traveling to other galaxies is too expensive/difficult is fun and unique. The only other scifi story I've come across with a similar approach was the Quantum Vibe webcomic. The writing and grammar are good. The heavy reliance on flashbacks and the timeskip at chapter 16 was a bit forced, but I believe the goal was to get to the meat of the story ASAP which I can respect. Setting up a thoughtout and consistent scifi/fantasy world in 60 pages is about the best you could hope for really. I am looking forward to how the story progresses.