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DipTheDoggie
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2018-10-10 07:02

It started off really well. I thoroughly enjoyed the novel but later on in the chapters, hints of cliche crap started coming out which thoroughly irritated me as I had absolutely loved this “original” novel. I.e first time he visits a town he finds a slave girl that he has to buy to follow him on his adventures, the mc is a kid and needs a slave girl really? Just my opinion but that ruined the whole thing for me.

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Thank you for your feedback dipthedoggie. I will take your advised with me and try to avoid those pitfalls in the future. Thank you for taking the time to write a comment it means you cared enough.

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